雅思写作开头分数不高的原因是……_in

雅思写作开头分数不高的原因是……_in
雅思写作开头分数不高的原因是…… 2017年11月25日的雅思考试已经向考鸭们逼近了,关于雅思写作,留学监理网的小编认为是比较难拿高分的,它考察了词汇量、语法、句型以及逻辑思维能力等多方面能力。因此,考鸭们一定要对雅思写作引起高度重视。那么在雅思写作中需要注意哪些问题呢? 图片来自网络,不用作商业目的。如有侵权,请联系我们删除。 如果你的雅思写作部分还没有准备好的话,一定要看留学监理网的小编给大家整理的这篇文章,这些雅思写作中致命的减分项考鸭们切记不要有。 中式英文 Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there. Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always chopped when I go out buy things…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get “baoying”. 观点模糊态度暧昧 Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me…… 偏离主题 Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire thequalifications and quality essential to success through university education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题) I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places. 语法错误惨不忍睹 Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题) About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should. 过分简单没有重点 Topic-The importance of environmental protection This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it! 用词不当 表达不准 Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think college students should not be allowed to get married because theyare very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family. 意思重复原地踏步 Topic-Your opinion on DINK families My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. Andit is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimesharmful to our society. 中国俗语胡乱翻译 Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family? I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe asentence: “Many sons, many lucks”…… 正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance? We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”…… Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/herfamily? Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese peoplealways say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”. 观点武断 态度强硬 Topic1-The importance of confidence In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All thesuccessful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people whodon’t have confidence, they all have failed. Topic 2 – The solution to the traffic problem I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more. 上述的错误有考鸭中枪吗?如果你还在为雅思写作复习而烦恼,就来看下一下四点备考建议吧! 雅思写作备考建议: 1. 当你想要表达自己有什么观点时或者其他情况,不要老是用see,say等。尽量用更加详细的词汇描述,例如see可以用perceive, understand,realize,recognize等。Say可以用speak,utter,vocalize,indicate,read,repeat等更加生动形象的去描述。 2. 尽量用些比较不常用的词汇,看起来很厉害的样子,但前提是你一定要完全理解所用词汇的意思,如果怕用错的话最好不要用,不要弄巧成拙了哦! 出国留学定位选校 想试试以自己的个人成绩能申请到国外什么层次的大学?可以使用留学志愿参考系统一键定位。http://school.liuxue315.cn/studyassess/?ozs=86307-2709使用方法:把你的GPA、托福/雅思成绩、专业名称、院校背景(211/985/双非)等信息输入到留学志愿参考系统中,系统会自动从数据库中匹配出与你情况相似的同学案例,参考他们的案例对比一下自己的情况,这样子就可以对自己进行精准的定位。 *图片源于网络,如有侵权,请联系小编删除

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